Ravitex's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[4th Dimension]

It was ok for what it was. I wouldn't say that I'd listen to this myself when I'm bored, but it was ok. Not sure why you put this in the "Dubstep" category though, as this certainly is not dubstep. You should also work on transistions a bit more.

DJROCKIT responds:

Did I put this as dubstep? oops my mistake.

[Second Chance]

Heyy, that's pretty good!

Codly responds:

ha thanks...

[Stay Positive (DJ Rokit)]

It's not great. Seems as if you just used pre-made loop samples (which at least sounded nice by themselves if that's the case). First transistion at 00:41 sounded bad. The first part just suddenly cut off and then the other lead synth came in without any context, sounds as if a whole other song has started playing. Transistion at 01:13 was also pretty bad, except that both parts kinda match. Assuming that both melodies are played in the same scale and that's the whole reason it fits. Same thing with the transistion at 01:25. On 01:41 it returned to the same intro pluck melody thing, which doesn't fit completely. Another transistion at 1:58, copletely out of place. You know what, I'm done talking about those transistions and segments.

In conclusion, I just have a very strong feeling that all those melodies and all this sound design are just pre-made sampled loops. Even the drums. They do sound nice by themselves, but still, they're unoriginal loops. And when you put them all like this in 1 "song", it's pretty bad.

If you actually knew scales, chords and all that other theory crap, there's just NO WAY that you would make this thing.

Those are basically my thoughts. Yeah.

DJROCKIT responds:

HAHA, did use pre-made loops! might edit it though.

[KiindBoii - New Round]

It's like a vine of the music world.
It's not bad though. Sounds like a proper retro video game song.
If it's difficult to make melodies for you, I would suggest learning scales. Learning some chords would help too.

KiindBoii responds:

Okay, this song was made in some random program that i wanted to test.

Thanks and i will keep those things in mind!

[n o]

Heeeeey, that's pretty good.
The design of the main bass sound could be better but whatever.

KORAII responds:

thanks mate :) I was mostly mucking around with harmor and i found something that sounded cool, so whatever xD